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Taking another whack at the Meereenese knot today. I'm going to try breaking two largish chapters into four smallish ones, changing the order of events somewhat, and weaving them all together. Maybe that will work a little better.



Can it really be September?? Ack. I can feel the heat of those flames...

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docbean79
Sep. 3rd, 2009 09:10 pm (UTC)
Breaking the knot
George,
Start the scene with a Myrenian style funeral.
Fat flakes of Ash falling like snow makes a pretty picture.

it will set the mood for what you'll have to do. ;)

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